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Monday, November 7, 2016

Haiku poems

Hi,In room 11 we have learnt how to do haiku poems.

Emotion:Anger

(5)Seeing dark red things
(7)clenched fists are tightly closing.   
(5) fighting and shouting

Emotion:Happy

(5) laughter in the air
(7)delighted people shouting
(5)collecting diamonds

Emotion:Hate

(5) Temper going up
(7) revenge is coming to you
(5)can’t handle the pain


2 comments:

  1. Haii Psalms i really like your Haiku poem especially the hate one.And i wouldn't change anything about it.

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  2. what nice haiku poem i really enjoyed it.

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